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- Switch the Device Builder bullet to imperative voice and drop the
dangling preposition and the "for you" filler, per style guide §6
defaults and §4 banned softeners.
- Lead numbered steps with an imperative verb; drop the install detail
that belongs in First Steps, not in a conceptual Learn the Basics
page.
- Flip "It is an option, not a requirement" to a positive framing per
§4 ("Excessive 'no' framing").
- Tighten "there are two ways" to a direct "you can control it two
ways", and "everything" to "the device".
- Add a forward link to the Device Builder Tour page so the sibling
Learn the Basics flow is symmetric.
Co-authored-by: Brandon Harvey <bharvey88@users.noreply.github.com>
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What does this implement/fix?
Routine sync of
devintomainto publish recent merges to the live wiki.Includes:
Types of changes
mkdocs.yml)Checklist:
devbranch (notmain)mkdocs servemkdocs.ymlmkdocs.yml